First Draft
This morning I opened a mail in another BLOG account. In it a rather Toppy someone very pointedly told me to SUBMIT, not the usual fall on your knees bitch demands but a strong directive non the less. I should submit one of my writings to a magazine for publication. There was a link all that was left was for me to submit.
I haven't truly submitted in a long time. It's about time I did.
I've decided to send my writings about my grandmother. My grandfather wanted us to use the money from her life insurance policy in any manner we chose, he even listed suggestions, the first being a way to commemorate her. I could think of no better way than to honor her in this manner.
This is my first draft; it needs to be tightened up. Please feel free to offer suggestions, I need some constructive criticism. The hardest part will be if I need to cut something out. I feel as though I should, it seems too drawn out.
Thanks,
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Last night before I tucked my self in I got a phone call. My grandmother of 97 just passed away. For the past year her quality of life wasn't there. She's lived a full life. There's no more pain and suffering. She's in a better place. I keep telling my self these things. And still I don't want the finality of it.
If I had one more day with her I'd want that day to be Christmas when we used to all gather together before everyone started to go off to college, marry and have children.
When I was much younger she'd always wrap up boxes of Kleenex, cheap bottles of shampoo/conditioner and tubes of tooth paste. We'd hate getting them as kids, but once we went off to college we started looking forward to opening them. Heck we started requesting toilet paper.
I want another Christmas with her. I want to tower over her once more and wrap her in my arms and smell that grandma smell. I want her to know how much I appreciated her thrifty ways. I want to tell her I love her.
This year on my mantel like so many before and years to come she will be there in spirit, for each one of those stockings she made by hand.
The girls and I left a few days later midday. We didn't arrive in my grandparent's home town till sometime after 1am.
I slept hard that night. My mother had to wake me up. The girls and I took our time getting ready. I suppose I was putting the inevitable off.
Before going into the Mayflower home, I swung by my grandparent's condo, beside it lay the barren ground where their garden once flourished. In it he planted more than flowers and vegetables he put himself there where my memories run wild.
I parked the car and with a heavy heart moved forward. He's getting over pneumonia and so he mostly stays within the home itself and not his assisted living apartment.
My feet took me only so far with each girl on either side of me. It was then I wavered. Like when my mother called at work in tears and I broke down the first time sharing her pain.
The girls heard me whisper.
"This is going to be so hard seeing him like this."
I saw one of my cousins and her father my own father standing beside my Uncle with my grandfather in the center. The others tried to hug me but on one existed quite like my grandfather did. He pulled me to him and I cried. I kept telling him I loved him.
The room grew quiet. The tough girl went soft on everyone. I kissed him on his head, a place I can now reach. He'll always stand straight and tall to me though. I had to get out of there and pull my self together.
"I'll be back grandpa."
And I stood out in the hall sucking in deep breathes of air. Thinking of my mother and Aunt doing my grandma's hair, two daughters as different as night and day side by side in unity; that's what love does.
My grandmother has hair down to her waist. Divided in half and braided, each section wrapped around her head in a coronet of daughterly devotion.
Later we went to his apartment looking for art work my grandmother had done, he wanted it displayed at her viewing. He couldn't find it, no one could, but I did.
I'm sitting on my hotel bed but soon I'll be with my grandmother. I hope she looks as though she's sleeping without the appearance of someone I don't know. I've got a picture of us three girls. I'll be slipping it into her gnarled fingers that once French braided my own hair.
I'm 38 years old. I know this sounds impossibly silly but I always thought I'd have my grandmother. She was going to live forever.
The girls and I was the fist to arrive to her viewing, I didn't expect that. We even stopped at a coffee shop prior to going in. I wanted to do something terribly normal before greeting an unwanted visitor, death.
And there she was laid out in a robin's egg blue casket. She never looked finer. I honestly don't remember her ever resting. I've never seen her asleep. She woke with the chickens and went to bed well after I did. I told my father the only time I ever saw her sleeping was in the car or slouched over her mending in front of the late night news.
My grandmother was never much for public displays of affection; she never let her guard down. I think she would have been okay with m stroking her fade; it was just me and her. I left her with a kiss on the forehead, why did I wait so long?
The necklace she wore was given to her from some perish member constructed of rolled up church bulletins my grandfather typed. Those were my grandmother's pearls. And tucked with in her hands is a picture of me and the girls.
Soon after, my grandfather arrived. When he was ready we made him comfortable in an easy chair as people come to sit with him and pay their respects. It troubled me to see him sitting alone staring off at my grandmother, all that family around and there he sat looking on and so I sat by his feet holding his hand. He clutched me as though he'd never let go.
We shared few words; I had trouble getting past the lump in my throat. He didn't have near my problem and so he carried on when all I could do was sit there and listen.
Things he said to me and those who came and went.
He had a long courtship with my grandmother, seven years to be exact. Part of which was spent in written correspondence.
"She always wrote about what she did, what the weather was like but never how she felt."
He paused between reflections of grandma and asked me a very pointed question.
"How are you, are you doing okay, is everything fine at home?"
The only thing separating me from this wonderful man was the curtain of my hair. I hid behind it during most of the viewing. It is rare anyone sees me crying.
What do I tell him? This man married me and baptized both of my children. I didn't want him to be a part of my divorce and so I lied.
I lifted my head, my hair parted; I looked him straight in the eye and lied.
"Yeah Grandpa everything is fine."
And he looked straight though me and knew I lied.
There was nothing more to say. We squeezed each others hands and stayed that way for a very long time. I'm sorry grandpa.
He continued sharing recollections of grandma.
"She was so independent and yet completely dependant. Once she married me she never drove a car or handled any finances."
My grandpa was a man. She let him be that man for her.
He kept stroking his pant legs right where she darned them. There was a hole in them where he fell at the bank. She was always working; she was always there for him. He was so proud to let everyone know that he didn't own a pair of socks that weren't darned by her.
That night at dinner I explained to my father what most don't realize. Grandma measured her love by how much she did for another. This woman didn't hug and kiss but devoted her life to mending ones socks. Why didn't they know this? My grandfather did.
Tomorrow will be a long day. The service is a ten am. Her burial procession will be the longest. She's to be buried 167 miles from here.
May you rest in peace grandma, I love you.
"Is anyone home?"
That's how my grandmother entered her home.
Today she went home but this time God answered.
After coffee this morning with my girls we walked across the street to the church. This time we weren't fist, my grandfather was already there. I kissed him good morning and promptly found my seat. Later I was informed as a family we were to walk in together.
Anyone who doesn't know me doesn't need to. I know who I am and why I'm here. I don't need to broadcast it. No, I and my girls are staying put. When all is said and done I'll get up and leave with my family just like I did every Sunday with my grandmother when my grandfather announced the benediction. He'd stop by our pew and together we'd follow my grandfather out and greet the congregation. Today is no different. I've never been one for appearances.
The family processional began, my sister slipped in beside me, she just arrived that morning at 4am. We fell into each others arms and sobbed.
The service commenced. I hung off of every word said. The pastor tried to do my grandmother justice, but the person being described wasn't the woman I loved with for four years, it just wasn't. She only spoke of her surface layer the part everyone is meant to see something barely scratched.
At this point the congregation was invited to speak and share a story or two of my grandmother. My heart pounded and sound roared in my ears and before I knew it I was in front of the podium shaking with emotion.
It was hard to speak around my heart with it stuck up in my throat chocking on sorrow.
I don't know how I managed it only that I had something to say.
"I'm privileged to know my grandmother in a way my cousins and siblings could never know her."
"And I stand before you today just as stubborn, and independent and private a person as she ever was."
"I made my grandmother cry at least once a week. She was stubborn, I was adamant. She wanted to do for me and I wanted to do for my self."
"The woman you knew isn't the woman I know."
"The woman I knew watched Days of our lives every day of hers."
"My grandfather pinched her fanny every time she walked by and you'd hear her chastising him for it."
"If it was fabric my grandmother ironed it. My jeans could walk to school without me. My undies never had an impure thought; my grandma straightened them out every chance she got. And it was a wonder my socks had any shape to them, they always seemed two dimensional to me."
"I never saw my grandmother lying down till now."
"I'd catch her napping in front of the TV or in the car. But she never did that, sleep that is or so she said."
"I never knew what holiday it would be when we sat down to eat. She saved every napkin that graced our table that could be used again."
"I have memories of her combing her hair out. She never used rubber bands to secure the end of her braids. She always saved the hair from her bomb and used them instead."
"I think the more outrageous I was the more it freed a laugh from her."
"Cooking was a science. It was like chemistry and if I wasn't going to be bothered to follow the directions precisely than I had no business in her kitchen. I'm here to tell you I've a recipe written by her, a favorite of mine. It calls for a quarter cup of butter with a comment from her > but I don't use it < Uh, huh. My grandfather would say "there is a right way and a wrong way and then there was of course your grandmother's way."
It took me a year to figure her out.
The only way my grandmother could show and say that she loved me was by the measure of what she could do for me. And once I understood this certain truth I became less adamant and more tolerant. In doing this I showed her how much I accepted and loved her.
I've never cried so much and so long in all my life. Where do the tears come from?
I lost more that a grandmother today, I lost a mother too.
It was hard coming here to say my final good bye, harder still to leave my grandfather all alone but it was time for us to go.
Before the girls and I hit the road we stopped in to say good bye to my grandfather. He was fast asleep in his bed, yesterday had taken its toll. I didn't want to disturb him but my Uncle insisted I wake him because it would mean a lot to him. Just as I leaned over to touch him he turned toward me but could barely keep his eyes opened.
My uncles eyes watered up and he tried pulling me in but I' over being touched. I need my space. And the last thing I want my grandfather seeing is me laving in tears.
I told him I loved him and I left.
And I left without the tears.
Later after I made it home safely my mother called me, she kept talking about my eulogy. I never planned on going up there. She didn't know how I got through it; she knew she could have never done what I did. We were in tears once again.
"It meant an awful lot to him" she said.
I know it meant an awful lot to her.
It is strange. I've not felt the need for church, felt comfortable inside on in a very long time. It just hit me how right it felt at my grandmother's service. I'm not sure what that means other than it was like coming home. She was there and he was there. To me God doesn't exist just in church. I feel his presence in nature more than anything else. But for me I have always recognized God through my grandfather and where he is God is. It makes me wonder will I lose God when I lose my grandfather.
A month later inside my mail box tucked between trivial matters was a letter from my grandfather. He used to write such long letters, letters I never seemed to have much time for, nothing more than a brief perusal at best. I hurt just reading this painful truth.
His script is still legible although his penmanship illustrates an unsteady hand. It was much shorter by a page and a half.
I remember a time when I first noticed my father's initial aging. Today I've noticed my grandfather's advancement.
My grandmother never worked after she married my grandfather with the exception of a few years when he served his country in World war two, she had to make ends meet.
In 1935 she purchased a $1,000 life insurance policy. My grandfather just received the check in the amount of $6, 722.00; he kicked in the rest in order to gift seven grandchildren each a thousand dollars in loving memory from our grandmother, and blessings and love from our grandfather.
He scratched out her name on the check. That makes me wonder why. In fact it bothers me. She never once signed a check or withdrew funds, why was her name even on them to begin with. Her name might as well stay on there. I want it to.
I still say grandma and grandpa. I can't think of him without her.
This summer I hope to drive up for a long weekend with my girls. Maybe I'll go up during fair time. We used to win ribbons together.
He found an apartment, with a window looking out across the street at his old place so he can watch is garden grow; I hope they tend it well. If they do they'll be tending more than vegetables and flowers, they'll be caring for an old man and his memories.
